The planet on-life-3

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Буду благодарен конструктивным замечаниям людей,
владеющих поэтическим английским... по устранению шероховатостей и ощибок...

The mankind, you have little chance to survive
In order to feel real, powerful drive
You ought to be on the front line of the Life
Or shorter and stronger, and brighter – ON-LIFE

To stave fly of nature off falling in dive
We must deal with planet, as if it`s a fife
Let`s say ower planet "hay, Planet, take five
The Planet ON-LIFE, The Planet ON-LIFE

The nature is too rich to meet our needs
But poor to sate us as humanly weeds
Reality blends of all our misdeeds
Don't suck out your motherland tits

To stave fly of nature off falling in dive
We must deal with planet, as if it`s a fife
Let`s say ower planet "hay, Planet, take five
The Planet ON-LIFE, The Planet ON-LIFE

If we will be foolish and stupidly greed
The nature may say: “ it isn't agreed “
The planet may drop us, may drop us, indeed
And we have an only way to succeed

To stave fly of nature off falling in dive
We must deal with planet, as if it`s a fife
let`s say ower planet "hay, Planet, take five
The Planet ON-LIFE, The Planet ON-LIFE

Be SAPIENSE, HOMO, or else not be
We all sons off hall universe referee
He wants our “oops” to a lesser degree
Be SAPIENS , HOMO, be SAPIENS, BE...

Let's stop any kind of the meaningless strife
Let's brake domination of bullet and knife
Let's say everybody each other “take five”
The PLANET ON-LIFE, The PLANET ON-LIFE …